Hello all! National Poetry Writing Month is on! It’s the time when poets from all around the world exhibit their love for the art of poetry writing. π
My poem for Day 13 is titled- Anymore. It’s a Fold Poem. A fold poem uses a bit of repetition and very light rhyme (only every second line rhymes) which makes it a wonderfully flowing form to write.
It has 11 lines, and the end of line 1 repeats as the end of lines 5 and 11. (That can be one word, a phrase, or most of the line, as you wish.) All the odd lines rhyme (1, 3, 5, 7, 9, 11) – but because 1, 5, and 11 are the same words anyway, you actually only need four rhymes in total. Here’s what the form looks like:
1 ~~~~~~~ refrain a
2 ~~~~~~~~~~~ *
3 ~~~~~~~~~~~ a
4 ~~~~~~~~~~~ *
5 ~~~~~~~ refrain a6 ~~~~~~~~~~~ *
7 ~~~~~~~~~~~ a
8 ~~~~~~~~~~~ *
9 ~~~~~~~~~~~ a
10 ~~~~~~~~~~~ *
11 ~~~~~~~ refrain a
Have a look at my attempt!
I won’t write love poems anymore.
Emotions were sadly, a gift-wrapped curse,
They left me hollow to the very core.
Poisoned my heart and left it to bleed,
I won’t write love poems anymore.
I wished to surf in the ocean called love,
Lies and deception stranded me on the shore.
I lost myself, striving to unlock his heart,
Little did I know, there never was a key to the door.
The ruins of my love, burn bright with grief,
I won’t write love poems anymore.
I’ve promised myself to not write love poems anymore. They just mess up everything, and I am so done with all those emotions. It’s giving me headache. π€ This would be my last love poem for a long, long, long time. So, everyone who loved reading my love poems, please go unsubscribe. Firefly is going to be a cruel dracula now. πΎπ
You can check out my previous attempts at #NaPoWriMo here and here. Thankyou. This is Firefly signing off! Keep shining! Stay at home. Take care of yourself and your family. β
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I see pain in your poem.
Ye Kya roz roz naya type ka poem likhte aap? Aur Hann! Kya hua aapko??π€£
Pain toh hoga hi naa. I wished to swim in the ocean called love, but then I remembered maine swimming nai seekhi hai kabhi. π€£
Aapko kya hai haan? New type of poems me kitna kam effort lagta hai. I like less effort. πΌ
Hahaha isiliye me koi type ke poems nai likhta. I write what I get. π
Try karne me kya ja raha hai aapka? π
Aalas naaa
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Bye. π
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Haan samajh gayi na. π Abse prem kavitayein hi nai likhna.
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